- deraadt@cvs.openbsd.org 2001/09/05 06:23:07
[scp.1 sftp.1 ssh.1 ssh-agent.1 sshd.8 ssh-keygen.1 ssh-keyscan.1]
avoid first person in manual pages
diff --git a/ssh-keyscan.1 b/ssh-keyscan.1
index 1a358b3..17f7340 100644
--- a/ssh-keyscan.1
+++ b/ssh-keyscan.1
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\" $OpenBSD: ssh-keyscan.1,v 1.11 2001/08/23 18:08:59 stevesk Exp $
+.\" $OpenBSD: ssh-keyscan.1,v 1.12 2001/09/05 06:23:07 deraadt Exp $
.\"
.\" Copyright 1995, 1996 by David Mazieres <dm@lcs.mit.edu>.
.\"
@@ -35,9 +35,9 @@
uses non-blocking socket I/O to contact as many hosts as possible in
parallel, so it is very efficient. The keys from a domain of 1,000
hosts can be collected in tens of seconds, even when some of those
-hosts are down or do not run ssh. You do not need login access to the
-machines you are scanning, nor does the scanning process involve
-any encryption.
+hosts are down or do not run ssh. For scanning, one does not need
+login access to the machines that are being scanned, nor does the
+scanning process involve any encryption.
.Pp
The options are as follows:
.Bl -tag -width Ds
@@ -88,15 +88,15 @@
to use IPv6 addresses only.
.El
.Sh SECURITY
-If you make an ssh_known_hosts file using
+If a ssh_known_hosts file is constructed using
.Nm
-without verifying the keys, you will be vulnerable to
+without verifying the keys, users will be vulnerable to
.I man in the middle
attacks.
-On the other hand, if your security model allows such a risk,
+On the other hand, if the security model allows such a risk,
.Nm
-can help you detect tampered keyfiles or man in the middle attacks which
-have begun after you created your ssh_known_hosts file.
+can help in the detection of tampered keyfiles or man in the middle
+attacks which have begun after the ssh_known_hosts file was created.
.Sh EXAMPLES
.Pp
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